A Walk in the Snow

Paula Dotson Frew
2 min readMar 21, 2020

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Photo by Chandler Cruttenden on Unsplash

The door opened to a frigid blast of air. The air made the air in my lungs crystallize, and the fluid in my eyes immediately began to dry. I began to bat my eyes in a desperate attempt to allow my eyes to function.

I stepped onto the porch and surveyed the crystalline blanket of snow covering the yard. After pulling my gloves up, I stepped out into the ground, enjoying the soothing crunch of the snow underfoot. It was rhythmic. It was subtle. It was expected.

I walked, enjoying the sound, to the shed at the far end of the property.

I reached out to open the door only to be disappointed. I turned back to the house, thinking I needed to wait until it was warmer. Halfway back, I noticed that there were no tracks in the snow. Frightened, I looked back. There were no tracks behind me, either.

My eyes were no longer dry. My lungs no longer ached with each breath.

As I neared the porch I saw the body. The coat the color of the ocean and the desert-colored hat were familiar. I had a dreadful feeling as I drew close enough to see the face. I screamed. I was looking at my own face, frozen in the midst of that horrible last breath.

I found quickly that I was destined to walk the snowy terrain, even though the seasons changed from winter to spring to summer to autumn back to winter.

Forever, I would trudge through the snow, never leaving tracks.

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Paula Dotson Frew
Paula Dotson Frew

Written by Paula Dotson Frew

I love to write and self-published my first book of poetry last year, a book of Haiku this year, and a book of short stories later this year!

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